So far in the story there hasn’t been anything extremely devastating happen except Joey becoming ill. If I could change one thing, though, I would want Joey to regain his strength and coordination faster so he can play pee wee league like his team. I just feel bad that he can’t swing right. It did make his first hit was an exciting game-winner, but until then he felt bad for being the weak link all season.
If I could change any part of the story, I would change John’s social life. I would have John have a girlfriend(or boyfriend) whom would assist him with his problems with dealing with Joey’s illness. It seems like he would just need a shoulder to lean on.
One part of the story I would change would be when Joey moved his hand. Instead of Joey moving his hand I would have him open his eyes. If Joey opened his eyes I think it would have more of an impact on the family.
One part of the story I would change would have to be when Joey goes into a coma. That is my least favorite part of the story because I don´t like that he is not able to remember things and is unable to walk. Although he is slowly learning how to remember things, I would change the story so that he would only have had a high fever and just not feel well.
I would change, that John got sick and could not play in the Sugar Bowl . John could not play ,which led to them not winning. John tried to win all his games for Joey but the virus john got did not allow him to play and they lost.
if I could change anything in the book i would change anything i would change the fact that joey has cancer because they wouldn’t have to worry about joey that much and they wouldn’t have to go to the hospital alot and he wouldn’t have to worry about his chickenpox or any other sickness that is dangerous with his cancer and he wouldn’t have to worry about dying at a young age.
In the story I would change Joey having cancer because the story gets boring when they talk about Joey being sick and them going to the hospital. I would change it by helping Joey out and giving him medicine that works. Also not talk about it that much in the book.
I would change the small talk between Eddie and John over the letter from Joey, it did not really need to be added because it makes John seem full of himself. I know that Eddie is somewhat jealous of John, and the fact that John was sent the letter from Joey makes the relationship between John and Eddie, even more interesting, but it was not all that important.
i would change it by having joey not have leukemia. i would have john be a baseball player. i would a kid named kyle in the book and he would bee a geek
The part of the story I would change would be the section where he gets into a coma and turns into an adult baby. The reason I would change this is because it has no relevance to the story. It sort of just happens for a while and everyone forgets about it.
If I could change one part in the story it would be the part where Joey dies. I think Joey should not of died because he have a great life going for him. Then on the other hand it might have been good that he died so that he has no more pain and weekly doctor visits.
One thing that i would change in the book is that, yes it sounds bad but i would make joey’s coma longer. I would change this because i feel like it was one of those things like it’s there then it’s not. How i would change it is well having his coma be longer in the book.
I would change the part where Joey gets chicken pox because he was already sick and it just made it worse.I would also change this because this led to the coma. I would also change this because it all led to him having to learn many things again.
If I could change a part in the story it would be joey not having cancer. I would change that because the book is getting boring. I think it would make it more intersting.
I would change the part were Joey gets the Chicken Pox because he needs to get sicker than he was cause it would make the book a lot more dramatic. I wish he had the stomach flu and was throwing up all over. Also I wish there was a robbery at the hospital when Joey was there and the robber held people hostage.
If I could change one part in the book i would change the part when John got sick and could not play in the Super Bowl. I would have really liked to see how the game would have went with John playing in it because he worker so hard to get is team there. I also it would have been interesting to see what the score would have been at the end of the game.
There needs to be more explosions. The movie better be directed by Michael Bay to make up for the book. Joey shouldn’t get chicken pox it just drags the story on longer. There needs to be more suspense. There needs to be more drama. There needs to be fire everywhere. Something needs to happen to John to make it even more dramatic.
The thing that I would change in the story “Something for Joey” is when Joey had gotten the coma. I would change that because I think the book would have been more interesting, I think this because Joey is the main character and he is absent for that part of the book. I would change that by having Joey become more sicker than he was before.
If I could change anything in the book I would change the fact that Joey went into the coma. I would change that because Joey has cancer, I wish he had something less intense like the cold for a couple days.
So far in the story there hasn’t been anything extremely devastating happen except Joey becoming ill. If I could change one thing, though, I would want Joey to regain his strength and coordination faster so he can play pee wee league like his team. I just feel bad that he can’t swing right. It did make his first hit was an exciting game-winner, but until then he felt bad for being the weak link all season.
If I could change any part of the story, I would change John’s social life. I would have John have a girlfriend(or boyfriend) whom would assist him with his problems with dealing with Joey’s illness. It seems like he would just need a shoulder to lean on.
Good, I like the different approach to the question and not having things change entirely about Joey.
One part of the story I would change would be when Joey moved his hand. Instead of Joey moving his hand I would have him open his eyes. If Joey opened his eyes I think it would have more of an impact on the family.
One part of the story I would change would have to be when Joey goes into a coma. That is my least favorite part of the story because I don´t like that he is not able to remember things and is unable to walk. Although he is slowly learning how to remember things, I would change the story so that he would only have had a high fever and just not feel well.
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I would change, that John got sick and could not play in the Sugar Bowl . John could not play ,which led to them not winning. John tried to win all his games for Joey but the virus john got did not allow him to play and they lost.
if I could change anything in the book i would change anything i would change the fact that joey has cancer because they wouldn’t have to worry about joey that much and they wouldn’t have to go to the hospital alot and he wouldn’t have to worry about his chickenpox or any other sickness that is dangerous with his cancer and he wouldn’t have to worry about dying at a young age.
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In the story I would change Joey having cancer because the story gets boring when they talk about Joey being sick and them going to the hospital. I would change it by helping Joey out and giving him medicine that works. Also not talk about it that much in the book.
I would change the small talk between Eddie and John over the letter from Joey, it did not really need to be added because it makes John seem full of himself. I know that Eddie is somewhat jealous of John, and the fact that John was sent the letter from Joey makes the relationship between John and Eddie, even more interesting, but it was not all that important.
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i would change it by having joey not have leukemia. i would have john be a baseball player. i would a kid named kyle in the book and he would bee a geek
The part of the story I would change would be the section where he gets into a coma and turns into an adult baby. The reason I would change this is because it has no relevance to the story. It sort of just happens for a while and everyone forgets about it.
Do you think that this shows how sick he really is though and the effect it is having on him?
If I could change one part in the story it would be the part where Joey dies. I think Joey should not of died because he have a great life going for him. Then on the other hand it might have been good that he died so that he has no more pain and weekly doctor visits.
He is still alive in the parts of the book you read.
One thing that i would change in the book is that, yes it sounds bad but i would make joey’s coma longer. I would change this because i feel like it was one of those things like it’s there then it’s not. How i would change it is well having his coma be longer in the book.
Proof read before you submit. Why do you want his coma longer?
I would change the part where Joey gets chicken pox because he was already sick and it just made it worse.I would also change this because this led to the coma. I would also change this because it all led to him having to learn many things again.
If I could change a part in the story it would be joey not having cancer. I would change that because the book is getting boring. I think it would make it more intersting.
I would change the part were Joey gets the Chicken Pox because he needs to get sicker than he was cause it would make the book a lot more dramatic. I wish he had the stomach flu and was throwing up all over. Also I wish there was a robbery at the hospital when Joey was there and the robber held people hostage.
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If I could change one part in the book i would change the part when John got sick and could not play in the Super Bowl. I would have really liked to see how the game would have went with John playing in it because he worker so hard to get is team there. I also it would have been interesting to see what the score would have been at the end of the game.
There needs to be more explosions. The movie better be directed by Michael Bay to make up for the book. Joey shouldn’t get chicken pox it just drags the story on longer. There needs to be more suspense. There needs to be more drama. There needs to be fire everywhere. Something needs to happen to John to make it even more dramatic.
The thing that I would change in the story “Something for Joey” is when Joey had gotten the coma. I would change that because I think the book would have been more interesting, I think this because Joey is the main character and he is absent for that part of the book. I would change that by having Joey become more sicker than he was before.
If I could change anything in the book I would change the fact that Joey went into the coma. I would change that because Joey has cancer, I wish he had something less intense like the cold for a couple days.
if i could change anything in the book i would change that joey died. i feel like that is too heart breaking and after geting the hesman trophy