What are some emotions your character is feeling right now in your spot in the book? Explain why they are feeling this way. Would you be feeling the same way if you were in their shoes? Why or why not? Must be at least 3 sentences and make sure to proof read before you submit!
The character Holly is feeling anger, she is feeling this way because Artemis locked her up in a cell. I would be feeling anger if I was in their shoes too. I would feel anger because I got locked up just because I’m a fairy and a spoiled brat millionaire did it to get more money.
I’m reading “Red Queen”. In my book Mare is worried and scared. Mare is worried because her plans to destroy the Silver Kingdom might fail. She is scared because if her plans do fail she and all the people she loves will be killed. If I were in Mare’s place I would also feel worried and scared. I wouldn’t want to risk harming my family and getting myself killed.
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Some emotions Thomas is feeling right now are fear, sadness, and confusion because Alby sacrificed himself to the grievers and he’s not positive why he did it. Thomas is scared because now he has to go up against the grievers, along with the other gladers that have to. I would be feeling the same way because it really sucks to see your friend/fellow homosapiansapian die. I would be scared, too, because i would NOT want to go up against the grievers.
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they are scard and confused on what to do because a hole. Bunch of people just died from the grievers attack on the glad.
what I would i would make a big box and have holes so you an put spears in it so if the grievers attack it they will get sperd and died.
BY:Adam Boudreau
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In the section I just read Alfie is feeling happy because the war is over and his dad is home so then his life is back to normal, mostly. I would feel the same if a war that going on for years is over and my dad came home from serving in it. So, that’s how Alfie was feeling.
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I am reading Stay/Leave his emotions are sad and mad because he went to bring his dad home and lost him. Now he went home and told his mom.Then he got mad and ran into his room and slammed his door shut.
BY: ME
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In my book The Maze Runner, Alby is feeling scared because he doesn’t want to get out of the maze. After going through the changing he has never been the same, he saw that the sun burnt the Earth and there was a horrible disease spreading. So he thinks it would be better to stay in the glade, and I wouldn’t blame him but I think I would rather follow Thomas.
I like this book because it tells you how everyone is feeling even the traitors. Like how Maven turned on Mare and Cal just to be king. So I like this book because it tells you how he was feeling but it didn’t tell why though. So I think it is a really good book because it shows so much emotion but keeps you wondering for the next chapter.
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Some emotions that Thomas is feeling are scared and nervous. He is feeling this because right now they are in the maze fighting greavers to get out. Then Teresa is trying to put in a code to get out.
How would you feel if you were in his shoes?
Some emotions that Mare is feeling at the moment are fear and frustration because she is at the capital with Maven and she is scared she won’t fit in with the Silvers. If I were in Mare’s shoes I would be scared too because I wouldn’t want to screw up and end up dying.
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Artemis is feeling very excited because he is getting his ransom money which is one ton of solid karat gold.
I’m pretty sure i would feel the same way if i was in his shoes because that’s like 33 million dollars.
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Alfies feelings are mad and worried because his father Gorgie keeps on saying the same 4 words “Home, Pills, Get down, okay sarge”. I feel that Alfie is about to freak out and snap.If i were in Alfies shoes and my dad kept on saying the same 4 words i would be worried alot, but not mad just a little frustrated
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In the section I just read Alfie is feeling happy because the war is over and his dad is home so then his life is back to normal, mostly. I would feel the same if a war that going on for years is over and my dad came home from serving in it. One other reason he is feeling happy is because he finally gets to ride on the milk float with his dad. I also would be happy to finally be able to do a job I’ve always wanted to do.
Artemis is very excited. And it is easy to say if I was excited if I was in their shoes. Artemis is excited because he has a ransom amount of money coming his way. So if I was him I would be very excited for money because who wouldn’t like money.
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In my book ”The Red Queen” she is scared and nervous and she does not know what to do she needs help.